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Interred with Their Bones, by Jennifer Lee Carrell

Title: Interred with Their Bones
Author: Jennifer Lee Carrell
Year of Publication: 2007
Length: 416 pages
Genre: thriller
New or Re-Read?: New
Rating: 2.5 stars

Interred with Their Bones is a Shakespearean twist on The Da Vinci Code, and if you approach the book with that firmly in mind, you’ll probably find some enjoyment in it. It is, however, one of those books where you can only apply but so much logic to it before the entire structure collapses under the weight of sensibility.

The book’s plot structure follows a little too neatly in the Da Vinci path, involving many of the same character tropes and narrative devices. We open, after a brief and vague historical flashback, with Kate Stanley, director of the Globe’s Hamlet, meeting for the first time in years with her estranged and eccentric mentor, Roz Howard. (If you’re enough of an early modern history geek to be quirking an eyebrow at those names, rest assured: yes, everyone in the book labors under similarly referential nomenclature). Roz has some terrible secret to impart and a quest to set Kate on, but before she can reveal the details of either, she is found dead in the aftermath of a fire (not, as the book jacket would have you believe, at the Globe itself, but in an auxiliary building). Kate feels obligated to pick up Roz’s trail of bread crumbs. As she follows them, more dead bodies start piling up around her, and she ends up fleeing with the police on her trail, a device which feels even more strange in this book than it does in The Da Vinci Code. Kate has no real reason to distrust the police, no reason not to clear herself from culpability before embarking on her quest, and so her actions just seem bizarre and inexplicable. It gives the drama of the plotline a false echo, and it’s just one of the threads that a reader has to avoid plucking at in order to avoid a total collapse of the narrative. Still, with thrillers, you do sometimes have to make plausibility allowances, so this element may not prove troublesome to all readers.

Part of what hindered my enjoyment of this book, which I could otherwise have consumed as mere Da Vinci Code-esque fluff, is that I resent, as a scholar, how much this book not only entertains anti-Stratfordian opinions, but implies that very serious people in the Shakespearean world would hold those opinions. (Hint: They don’t. Some actors and directors, shamefully, but no scholar worth his or her salt gives the authorship “controversy” any credence because it doesn’t deserve any). I started to recoil as soon as Carrell broached the topic, and eventually, that aversion colored my reading of the text pretty strongly. I now know how art historians and theologians alike must feel about Dan Brown.

Despite the pitfalls of the exploration of the “controversy,” the book is actually at its best when traipsing through historical possibilities — the inventions linking Cardenio to Catholic plots via Cervantes and Jesuits are reasonably entertaining and provide some profitable fodder for exploration. I could cheerfully entertain all of that, if not for the editorial commentary suggesting that any of it might be true. The jet-setting aspect of the book, volleying from London to Harvard to the Southwest to Spain (and ricocheting back and forth between some of those a few times) is a fun diversion, and Carrell does an admirable job of painting her landscapes.

One of the critical failings in this book, unfortunately, lies in its protagonist and narrator. Carrell presents Kate as though she is some big up-and-comer in the Shakespearean field, a director that a Patrick Stewart/Ian McKellan type would refer to as “that brilliant American child.” Kate, of course, demurs from this description in , but the whole thing smacks of Informed Ability. Kate is a brilliant scholar and director because Carrell tells us that she is. This trait in of itself wouldn’t be so bad, except that, for such a prodigy, Kate has some pretty glaring gaps in her knowledge — and one of them is the fundamental underpinning of the mystery, the fact that Shakespeare wrote a lost play entitled Cardenio. The first-person narrative also hampers the book, partially because Kate’s head is not quite an interesting enough place to spend four hundred pages in, partially because it accentuates that gulf between her reputation and what she actually knows. First-person narration creates a trap for a writer: if the audience needs to know something, either the narrator knows it and tells it, which can come off as preachy, or the narrator doesn’t know and has to find out in order for the audience to find out, even if it’s something the narrator should already know — or shouldn’t need quite as much hand-holding to figure out. Interred with Their Bones manages to fall into both pits multiple times at different points in the story.

Interred with Their Bones was adequate entertainment for lying on a beach. If you’re in a place where your mind can let go and indulge freely in a suspense romp, then by all means, pick this up. The pace clips along well enough to keep a reader engaged, and if the plot turns are occasionally too predictable, sometimes that’s what you’re looking for out of light summer reading. If you’re looking for heavier fare or superlative writing, though, you may want to look elsewhere, as this book doesn’t hold up well under even light scrutiny. Apparently there’s a sequel. Might I read it? Sure, if someone handed it to me free of charge, and I had some time to kill. Unfortunately, that level of engagement and investment is all that Carrell’s writing warrants.

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Worth Any Price, by Lisa Kleypas

Title: Worth Any Price (Bow Street Runners #3)
Author: Lisa Kleypas
Year of Publication: 2003
Length: 388 pages
Genre: historical romance
New or Re-Read?: Re-Read
Rating: 3 stars, on credit

I always find this one disappointing. I think it’s because I don’t care as much for the heroine as I might. It’s not that there’s anything really wrong with her — there are just ways in which I feel she lacks substance, and that makes this the weakest of the three Bow Street Runners novels. And that’s a shame, because Nick Gentry deserved better. Unfortunately, with so little to play against, he’s not exactly showing to his best in this book, either, and so the whole thing just ends up feeling like it missed the mark.

Well. The plot. Nick Gentry is three years into his forcible reformation as a member of the Bow Street Runners, atoning for his past as a criminal mastermind. He’s also still taking some private commissions, and one of them involves hunting down the would-be bride of the much-older and creepily-obsessed Lord Radnor. He finds her, but quickly realises she’s not what he had assumed — rather than a willful, spoiled girl being petulant, he finds an openly terrified young woman who still doesn’t let her fear jeopardise an iron core. Nick is impressed enough — and attracted enough — to offer to marry her as an alternative, to remove her from Radnor’s influence forever; Charlotte is desperate enough to accept. Then they have to figure out how to be married to each other, and there’s lots of negotiating back and forth, and a lot of Lottie trying to break through Nick’s defenses. It’s somewhat predictable, and without enough flair to make the predictability of the plot worth it. Kleypas does do a nice job with the villain; Radnor is a pretty scary creature, who invested a lot of money trying to turn Charlotte into “the perfect woman”. It’s sort of 19th-century Stepford thinking. It’s also implied that he molested her when she was a teenager, and when he realises Lottie is out of his reach, he kidnaps her younger sister to lure her away from Nick. Despite the promise of that set-up, the action sequence at the end deflates pretty quickly.

The other side of the plot comes from Nick’s sister Sophia, from (obviously), Lady Sophia’s Lover. Sophia is nudging Nick to reclaim his latent viscountcy, and her husband is supporting her — rather forcefully managing Nick’s life from a distance — because they’re both worried that Nick is going to get himself killed working for Bow Street. There’s also the matter of Bow Street’s tenure coming to an end, ceding to make way for the Metropolitan Police, which is an interesting but under-used historical tidbit. This plotline had potential, but didn’t get explored nearly enough; Nick has a temper fit, but then acquiesces in a grumbling sort of way. But Kleypas doesn’t do much with it past that. The announcement is the setting for a plot point, but we never really get to see Nick come to terms with his responsibilities in an emotional way.

The sex scenes were still good. I do appreciate that we open with Nick learning how to be a lover from a famous madam, and I like that Kleypas toys with a little bit of bondage play in this book. A little. Not much, because, well, historical romances just never seem to want to go there, much to my dismay. But it is there, and I’m glad for it. Other than that, though — I just don’t have a lot to say about this book. It’s serviceable; it closes out a trilogy; it could be skipped without feeling like you’re missing too much.

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